No Air
Fireworks light up the night on July 4. Giving a brilliant light show for everyone who watches. Being cheap and mass produced, everyone stocks up to make a big bang. This can be a problem because it can have a very bad explosion if that stock was introduced to flame. Although they are beautiful and everyone loves to watch, some people actually take apart their fireworks and try and improve it to make a bigger bang. Putting the gun powder in things like gatorade bottles can have bad health effects for people near by. The elderly can have heart atacks from the smoke and the loud sudden noises, and any near passerby can get hurt from a hurtling debris coming from the homemade bomb. Fireworks are a beautiful way to celebrate any occasion however they are illegal to pop them if not on New years or July 4th . So do the right thing and let others sleep peacefully without the sudden bang from a fire cracker and the smoke that comes with it.
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Hi Kiana,
ReplyDeleteYou do take a stand on the fireworks issue, but you could provide more specific support. I don't know that I've ever heard statistics or details about fireworks cause heart attacks from smoke and loud sudden noises. They may cause this, but has this been a major complaint about fireworks here?
Your title, No Air, is a good one, except that it does not really match your paragraph. If you were focusing on respiratory problems, which are a problem, then the title would work better.
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