Reflection on portfolio

I feel that I did an excellent job on my portfolio. My theme was a "surfing" and I feel that I did a great job describing it through my media skills by using pictures which some were made by photoshop. My evidence of my learning as well really did match my theme I was going for for my portfolio. In conclusion I think I did a fair job getting my evidence across in an effective way.


Parent Comment
1. Kalei I liked how you had alot of different pictures to show your theme but I think you could have used more of a variety for your evidence.
2. Your "Voice" trait shows how important it is for your feelings to come across in your writing piece. I especially like the propaganda poster because it shows persuasivness in few words.
3.I would like you to work more on word choice Kalei because that will help distinguish your essays from the rest of the bunch. It will make your writing piece alot more effective and pleasing to the audience that reads it. Overall good job keep it up Kalei :)